【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% I+ `& _5 u4 k) q( y8 [0 f4 G+ s1 T; |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% }. U% n) e8 P- w! `0 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 x# J8 W6 }5 z7 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& ^; F/ X% r' Y0 N1 q/ HI would probably know how you feel
. p1 o$ F' Q3 V4 d9 i/ h' Q6 i" }9 ALove… just the word love
1 ~0 Z: S6 G9 Q: |4 L" X! r5 H# NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 M8 K0 D6 I5 K  U+ u3 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 G4 U6 Q" ]6 Q1 d) oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 g: q# w0 L  O# wWhy is it so difficult to express?
  ~1 [- h6 C* F3 i* F+ E/ `I want to confess that I love you,
2 k, W, f  W  _6 o( F) I; SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: u( t, Q) n+ I+ F/ Z- ~2 J, hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

8 }$ f, c4 P. f& \. o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 M$ P5 U& H' \$ l) j# Y' f2 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) _8 p3 R$ Z- Z- d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' o3 i, _9 ~' ^# u2 g3 V  R4 U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 o' M- H; D. f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 W2 |! x% q2 [& D' S8 N, d4 B/ H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, ]4 K0 ^' Q  {3 ~/ d& L1 z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. w) x- F8 x6 _2 O4 F9 x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  d# n* V. Q. [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 p0 N4 g  Z1 S/ d% D" H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( A# A; o8 E9 m0 K0 z+ }! D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( Y* o* [0 L" f7 Q  g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! `" |: d1 l+ ~4 A  f; Q! r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* D  {1 J, ]# R7 j% U6 e3 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# S. J0 m- w% h- c; k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; ]9 E! G7 O3 n" q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( d7 i$ \4 a9 |8 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" P/ G1 H: l9 p+ i, P" T5 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' w8 K- z: }4 Z6 h" l& B# ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ v, ^" ~8 ]0 }# S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 I- r# `! p* J- n+ i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* E9 L8 [. g8 ?7 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, A8 m/ [/ ]  w& V* G( N4 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 C. P3 ]  }5 O* F; i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% s( P" [% ~3 a, @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: m$ q  Z& d4 @# X6 M/ E: }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ g4 e, ~% q5 m1 g! J9 x* J2 l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ t/ l+ _8 `/ R: X1 @! z, B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>